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Whirlwind

“Whirlwind” A whirlwind in my head have I, Spinning fire, rock, magic and poetry. The day turns to night as I breathe in your words. This heart rests only in sleep... The world getting broader is set askew. Slanted earth where the gravity pulls me to you. The silence, once a dreadful sound, Is filled with orchestras of thoughts, of powerful overtures. My mind dances to your rhythm, heart mimics the beat. My hands have been growing colder since first we met, As my heart demands my blood, my life force and won't share. Let us sit on a cloud and point to the ground, At an old life of loneliness and grief. A whirlwind in my head have I, Where it spirals and binds, You and I into blissful eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/17/2011 5:04:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Charisse. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:34:00 PM
This is excellent and perfectly crafted to bring out the meaning as glaring as possible. I love this piece!
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Date: 11/16/2011 1:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..Very romantic work..Sara
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