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Whirlwind

Whirlwind terror Away to face the eternal. Loved by family and friends but Lost to us now. Always remembered, taken too quick. Clever fox left unfinished business Ending life's journey too soon.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 5/26/2010 7:37:00 AM

very sad, such feelings, wonderful poem harry

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/1/2010 5:38:00 AM

such longing a dear tribute. Light & Love

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/11/2009 8:56:00 AM

I read your mothers Acrostic feature moments ago, commented on her feature and would like to simply say wonderful write here Doris... It is always a good day when I start my day with your writing, along with Saras'... Godspeed to the both of you........:JP]

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/11/2009 5:02:00 AM

Congratulations, Doris, on having your well-written, but sorrowful, poem featured this week. My condolences to you for your lost Wallace. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Lovingly, Dane

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/10/2009 6:59:00 PM

Interesting poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolandax6tr5

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/10/2009 4:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Doris. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 11/9/2009 4:10:00 PM

Doris, I too want to wish you all the best in your surgery tomorrow. I will be sending good thoughts and prayers your way for a speedy recovery. Your mom just let me know bless her heart and yours. Take good care of yourself okay. Love Light Patty

P Sheart

Date: 11/9/2009 3:14:00 PM

Doris, congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! I also want to say I feel for your loss, it's never easy is it sigh. Bless your heart with this one hun. take careLove Light Patty