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Whirls

"Do not feel Lonely the entire Universe is inside you." Rumi With endless microcosom's curl both inside and out of man's swirl of atoms and world's spins each as lovely as a pearl. For God's has formed, so many worlds each in a perfect whorl. Attach, connect, be playful, free open arms and hearts by His decree bless the large and the small with grace and camaraderie together birthed in harmony harken all to His call.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/10/2012 7:08:00 PM
To my favs.
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:06:00 PM
A profound write from you Debi.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/10/2012 3:44:00 PM
Good one...Enjoyed reading this one..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 5/10/2012 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Rumi In Rime Couee" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win Debbie !! well done !! love ya deb...
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Date: 5/10/2012 9:14:00 AM
There are so many ways we can interpret such wise words, and make them connect to so many facets of our lives. Beautifully said! Congratulations, Debbie!
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Date: 5/10/2012 7:25:00 AM
Deb, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations once again on your winning piece Debbie xx
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:03:00 AM
and to be part of your universe is just grand, debbie.. congrats on your wonderful win in m contest!...:) huggs!
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Date: 5/5/2012 11:36:00 AM
debbie, thanks for this nice piece... did you mean"attach, connect(,)be playful, free... just a comma i know but makes a lot of difference...:) huggs!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/5/2012 11:36:00 AM
darn, TPS removed the picture!
Date: 4/24/2012 7:36:00 PM
Aha, so this is a rime couee. One I have yet to try! At first I was thinking this could fit the midnight pearl category. Very nice entry, Debs and I enjoyed the quote at the bottom.
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Date: 4/24/2012 9:49:00 AM
Wow, I sure would love to go star gazing with you, Deb. You have such a unique interpretation of the sights to be found throughout te universe. Awesome poem and I love the quote by Rumi. (Needed to hear that now.) Best wishes in the contest, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2012 12:54:00 AM
Very uplifting write.Enjoyed.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/24/2012 7:23:00 AM
Thanks hon you know for me God has no sex ;)
Date: 4/23/2012 11:44:00 AM
A double Rime couee.....even better!! another gem!
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