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Whirlpool

The swirls of the whirlpool are dragging me down, I often feel like I'm going to drown.The whirlpool is all of my sin, all of my anger that's stored in a bin, all of my hatred, all of my pain, living this lie and going slowly insane.My life has been a lie, a joke, a shame and I need to remind myself again and again that there's a point to life that I cannot explain, my sin has come back on me it is too late, i cannot get out, i am to blame. Being sucked down, the water above my head, unable to hear, unable to see, unleashing a scream that will never be heard, a tear coming from under the seam. Water in my mouth, my nose, my ears, the sin washing over me from the wasted years. By: Derrick Frank

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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