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Whining

Whining dried eye sockets from imaginary losses conceived in the mind spilled tears in the murky soil forming ripples in the mud

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Date: 9/26/2016 11:43:00 AM
"Ripples in the mud" very powerful image, Mrs Nayda. Such deep expressions! Good luck.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/26/2016 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 9/26/2016 7:24:00 AM
Oh nayda! This is so deep! One of my fave's that I've seen for this contest so far... Good luck I think Rick will love it ;)-luloo
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/26/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Laura
Date: 9/26/2016 5:31:00 AM
Deep and nice ...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/26/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Probir

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