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Whimsicality

Bereft.. tingles and sway deserted heartstrings bestilled.. I yearn for the thrill of the dance and for ravishing trills of arpeggio moments.. widowed.. the capriccio has died; lifeless in swoon-less inertia I pine for zealous zephyrs to float my cloudless notes and kiss me aquiver - to shiver my craving broken chords in the lusty bluster of his imaginative airs and the lively magic of his lyrical lovemaking wistful without whispers blue without wind-songs chant-less.. I suffer in silence - awaiting my escapade in the windy caprices of his mind-blowing dalliances.. for neither of us can sing without the other. Susan Ashley September 14, 2018 ~ Third Place ~ Best Free Verse July 1 - October 1, 2018 John Hamilton *Capriccio: 1. Music; a lively piece composed freely and without adhering to the rules of any specific musical form. 2. A whim; caprice.* *Caprice: 1. A sudden, unpredictable change, as of one’s mind or the weather. 2. A sudden, unpredictable change in attitude, behavior, etc; whim. 3. Another word for capriccio.*

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/20/2018 12:45:00 PM

Hi Susan, once more your creativity lays a wonderful piece of poetry before us. Belated congratulations on your win with this deserving piece. Your imagination truly sings in this excellent gem. Whimsicality in musicality. This is deserving of a fave. Truly wonderful poetry Susan. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/27/2018 9:28:00 PM

The beauty and appreciation expressed in your comments fill me with heartwarming elation. Thank you, Mike, for the kindness of your congrats, the generosity of your spirit and the fave. Your wonderful words of uplifting praise is always such a joy to receive and are truly treasured. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/11/2018 3:03:00 AM

OMG this is marvelous Susan! "widowed..the capriccio has died;lifeless in swoon-less inertia I pine." I am in awe! Congratulations on your deseving win! : )

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/11/2018 3:52:00 PM

Oh Connie, your wonderful comments warm my heart, thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem... your lovely sentiments and kind congrats are deeply appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Greg Gaul

Date: 10/5/2018 1:37:00 PM

Whimsical crafted elegance of imagery and inner feelings in your poem. Skillful bit of poetry. Congrats.

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/6/2018 9:46:00 AM

Greg, I relish your wonderful visit. It is as inspiring to hear from you as it is to read your lovely poetry. Thank you for your meaningful and enchanting comments and kind congrats that bring on a smile. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Francesca Pappadogiannis

Date: 10/3/2018 12:38:00 PM

Congratulations Susan. This was an unusual piece for me and I truly loved how you wrote this. Well done :) xxx

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2018 8:50:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with me, Francesca. I relish your beautiful comments and kind congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Warren Doll

Date: 10/2/2018 8:08:00 AM

Susan Congratulations on your win. It is very well deserved, ~Warren

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2018 10:52:00 AM

Thank you, Warren, for your wonderful comments and kind congrats. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Hamilton

Date: 10/1/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thoroughly enjoyed this one Susan, you were smart to include all the musical references, congrats on a fine win!

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2018 10:51:00 AM

Thank you, John, for your lovely comments and kind congrats. It is an honor to be amongst such esteemed poets on your winner’s list. Your sponsorship is appreciated. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~ Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2018 1:02:00 PM

This is beautiful, Susan. Two hearts yearning for each other...longing to become one, reminding me of a split heart-shaped charm necklace desirous of a lasting union. Only then will music and song reach heights of passion. ~ Warm regards & Hugs my friend. // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/28/2018 10:55:00 AM

Thank you for your very poetic and pleasing comments, Paul. Your insight is deep and your beautiful thoughts are held in precious appreciation.. I'm so happy you enjoyed the passion of my poem. Warmest wishes and hugs always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/21/2018 12:15:00 PM

A superb, awesome mega write...my mega, awesome superb twin sis...fav time...see you in the castle...+WW+

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/23/2018 10:11:00 AM

Such superb comments from my super superb, triple-terrific triplet bro.. Thank you, WW, for your awesomeness and for the fav.. the Unicorns thought you'd like this.. lol! See you in the West wing, crazy Twis sis is cooking tonight - I just have to let her know that.. ha! Warmest wishes and love.. Twisy Sisy

Silent One

Date: 9/19/2018 5:12:00 AM

Apreggio moments would be very dramatic,but so moving and emotive.. Great use of alliteration, particularly in the chorus of your poetic musical poem.. That is love, when two people can only sing as one..

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/20/2018 9:11:00 PM

Indeed! Very well said.. Your insightful and uplifting comments have brightened my heart and my day, Silent One. Thank you for the kindness of sharing your wonderful thoughts with me. Warmest wishes always my poetic friend.. ~Susan

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2018 6:20:00 PM

love the expressive tone of this remarkable piece, susan..ohh how you flow like a river...huggs

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/19/2018 10:20:00 PM

It's always a pleasure to receive your wonderful comments, Nette, that seem to always touch my heart in such a lovely way. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts with me. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Charles Messina

Date: 9/18/2018 9:56:00 AM

You have made my jaw drop again, Susan. Your beautiful poetry puts me in such awe. Wonderful and masterful my mind is blown away. Warmest wishes and love and hugs my dear friend. ~Charlie

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/19/2018 12:28:00 PM

Dear Charlieku, the beauty of your heartfelt comments fill me with delight. Your precious thoughts charm me with their warmth, as always, and are truly appreciated, my wonderful friend. Warmest wishes, love and hugs to you always.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2018 8:40:00 PM

My goodness. Was this for the emotion contest. I would say this would be great for that one. LOVED this.

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 2:18:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comments, Andrea. This poem was written for the pure pleasure of writing and not for any contest in mind.. but who knows, I may enter it in one someday.. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem my friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/15/2018 6:17:00 PM

You enrich and inspire with poetry like this marvelous piece Susan! A real treat to read today. Brava! : )

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 2:17:00 PM

It is as much a joy for me to read your beautiful and heartwarming comments as it is to read your lovely poetry, Connie. Your visit is inspiring and truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Mark Peterson

Date: 9/14/2018 8:45:00 PM

This is simply a superlative use of language, rich in manifold figures of speech I so enjoy.

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 2:14:00 PM

Thank you, Mark, for your heartwarming and beautiful comments. Your visit is a joy! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eve Roper

Date: 9/14/2018 8:29:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this marvelous piece deep and melancholy, Susan. hugs eve

Eve Roper
Date: 9/17/2018 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, it means a lot to me.. Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 2:13:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comments, dear Eve. Please accept my sincere sympathy for the recent loss of your beloved husband. I will keep you and your family in my thoughts and prayers.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/14/2018 5:22:00 PM

My dear friend, your poetry is always wondrously conceived, executed and has that very special quality about it! Your messages are always strong, on cue and inspiring! Your free verse also reveals a massive vault of stored knowledge , vocabulary, and depth that sinkS into the heart of any topic you write about.. A fav.. - a true free verse gem..

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 2:10:00 PM

Dear Robert, is it always a thrill to read your insightful and beautiful comments, so full of sincere and heartwarming encouragement and genuine appreciation for artistic expression. Thank you, Robert for your beautiful and heartfelt comments and for the fav.. both are held in my truest gratitude as it your wonderful friendship. Warmest wishes always, dear friend.. ~Susan

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/14/2018 5:12:00 PM

You own such an enchanting vocabulary of scintillating words. Your poetry is rich in flavor, I hope you find your song partner soon. xo

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 1:57:00 PM

Thank you, Pixie, for your enchanting and thoughtful comments.. It is as much a pleasure to read your lovely thoughts as it is to read your beautiful poetry.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Chris Green

Date: 9/14/2018 12:47:00 PM

Very beautifully done Susan. This poem is soft and tender and holds its own special melody. This poem deserves a "sigh".

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 1:56:00 PM

Chris, it is as much a pleasure to read your beautiful comments as it is to read your breathtaking poetry.. Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/14/2018 11:48:00 AM

Merging souls satisfying their whims while breathing the breeze of music and dancing under the beats of "the wind chimes".. When "bereft" and "windowed" the soul loses voice, brightness and wanes in pain.. a genuine rendition of one of the soul's states of lifelessness.. A brilliant work of art! A wonder to the eye! Definitely a FAV. My warmest regards dear Susan.. Love and hugs. Stay blessed always.

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 1:52:00 PM

My dear friend, Besma, the beauty of your poetic insight is heartwarming and breathtaking.. you interpret my poem like a sister of my heart and soul, as you see and feel the emotions spilled in my verses. Your comments fill me with joy and appreciation for your brilliant presence that lights up my page with your inspiring thoughts and my heart with your unique and precious friendship. Thank you for your cherished comments and for the fav, as both are held in my truest gratitude.. My warmest wishes, love and hugs to you always my lovely friend.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/14/2018 11:26:00 AM

This is lyrical like a song, a soothing, melody with heart.

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/17/2018 1:41:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend, Caren, for your truly lovely and most appreciated comments. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan