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While My Pen Gently Weeps

Tears are tangled and hearts are mangled Wasted weeping deep inside Crystal balls showing love that falls For our love is thus denied Silent screams of broken dreams Lachrymal layers laying low Wishing wells of thought that swells Our love has no place to go Genocide... looks inside The wastelands of lost souls Come and find for now I’m blind And have fallen through the hellion holes. July.28.2016 Three Stanzas - Poetry Contest By Broken Wings

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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/4/2016 8:01:00 AM

Silent screams of broken dreams...loved it.

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/4/2016 10:29:00 AM

Thank you Gerald...god bless...^WW^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2016 6:35:00 PM

so sullen and lovely with greeat flow, WW... your pen is gold today and always.. huggs

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/31/2016 7:01:00 PM

Thank you nette...and you are a golden goddess along with the other lovely ladies here at the Soup Bowl...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison

Date: 7/29/2016 7:52:00 AM

deep and sad - a very clever take on the contest theme - the title reminds me of the song 'while my guitar gently weeps':-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/29/2016 8:28:00 AM

Thank you Jan...yes, I'm a Beatles fan lol...I wonder if Paul and Ringo are going to sue me lol...god bless...hugs back...^WW^