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Which Is It?

Is the heart material or has materialism taken over the heart. Are we fickle because of modernisation or has modernisation taken over our souls?

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Date: 11/28/2009 8:22:00 AM

Poetry Fathima-civilisation moderated?

John Freeman

Date: 8/6/2009 11:17:00 AM

In my opinion, the later, to answer the question your poem presents. Just my opinion tho. Your poem is thought provoking, for humanity to ponder. Sincerely Moses

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/15/2009 6:00:00 AM

Maybe some hearts are. But are we fickle, probably. Thought provoking. Love, Shar

Gael Attal

Date: 6/15/2009 12:30:00 AM

It's enjoyable... and definitely a ponder. I would love to see this poem grow and expand! There's a lot of potential and I want you to write more !! xD it's greaT! good job. =3