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Whether Or Not

“whether or not” two days without walking, and without out loud talking. have i gotten lazy, or have i gone crazy; complaining, when’s the rain going to start stopping?

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Date: 9/30/2023 12:40:00 AM
Hi Jeff….great poem especially the last line “start stopping” hehe! Debx
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/30/2023 1:04:00 AM
Thanks for noticing that Deb, and thanks for reading and commenting
Date: 9/26/2023 7:22:00 PM
Your in the moment. Get out!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/26/2023 8:09:00 PM
Too late. May day! May day!!!, but thanks for the comment

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