Get Your Premium Membership

Whereisthepast

Don't forget my dear It's your turn to wind the clock before you sleep, love!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/1/2011 1:45:00 PM
Clever little write. The present quickly becomes the past, in one tick of the clock. Thank goodness we have our memories!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/20/2011 12:32:00 PM
This is sweet and also quite clever, Judy. I'm sending you a Soup mail. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 6/12/2011 4:09:00 PM
cool and clever write Judy.. luv that title flowing into one word .. do wind up clock still sell luv?
Login to Reply
Date: 6/12/2011 7:10:00 AM
So nicely done. I dig this.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/12/2011 6:23:00 AM
Those clocks that have to be wound are almost a thing of the past..Enjoyed reading your Senryu this morn..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 6/12/2011 6:18:00 AM
Or just hit the snooze and sleep in....smiles from this write Judy....
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs