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Where Whispers Go

Have you ever wondered where whispers go, When our secrets no longer matter? Or the kind that cause two lover's hearts To even go, pitter patter? Whispers become the breeze in the fall That chase the Autumn leaves Or that gasp of surprise, when you kneel to propose With that diamond she finally receives A whisper becomes that wind in your sails As you're sailing the ocean's blue Or maybe that sound you make with your mouth When you're telling your cat to "Shoo" It's that adrenaline you feel, the moment you fall That gives your heart that rush Or maybe that sound, when someone gets loud And you ask them nicely to "Hush" A whisper's the part we can't leave behind And maybe, you consider it odd But a whisper is what gave life to our souls For a whisper's the Breath of God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/2/2011 7:54:00 PM
Awesome write, Larry. Excellent. Ralph
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:33:00 PM
A very creative poem. Excellent! Kim
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Date: 9/27/2011 5:09:00 PM
good write this, unusual, but intriguing. i like this
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Date: 9/27/2011 2:08:00 PM
Ah, very nice. keep up the great work. Lee
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