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Where the River Meets the Sea

What would I give to get a glimpse of your smile to have and to hold your heart for a while I want to meet you where the river meets the sea Leave your oars behind Set the barrier down and sail away with me We'd sail away together to wherever the wind blows to our soul's velveteen garden where blushed crimson bleeds its rose We'd sail away forever to a secluded land I curl within your arms and hold on to your hand We'd lay on autumn's blanket Watch the sea-gulls soar up high Flutterin' their wings above blue waters 'Neath a mandarine sunset sky What would I give to feel your fingertips brushing sand between my toes To taste your honey-dew breath as the moonlit cradle glows But,here I walk upon the sidewalk each footprint leading home Under an antique street light Standing on my own And here I am singing a love song My shadow dancing free And there you stroll along the river-bank so far away from me.
For Nicola Byrne Contest : Long Distance Love P.S- A revised poem and first attempt to add a picture image,Hope it works ??

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/20/2016 1:19:00 AM
Hi Charma, The title alone caught my attention. I was not disappointed. As I started to read I saw beautiful metaphors and lovely images. I felt the love, sense of longing and desire. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis The imagery
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Date: 10/19/2016 4:54:00 PM
Good to see your poems shining in the contests...congrats Charma
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Date: 12/31/2015 1:56:00 PM
A revised comment : )... I so adore your writing. Pure romance. You have me hanging on every word...Happy New Year Sweet One.
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Date: 2/21/2015 3:33:00 AM
Nicely done, Charmaine! Most elegant!! :) john.
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:15:00 PM
Beautiful Picture and beautiful Poem!
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:18:00 AM
Ah, this is the perfect picture and poem combination. You have done outdid yourself, Charmaine! Let me know when you do more of these picturesque poems, because I will gladly read them!
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Date: 1/8/2015 10:00:00 AM
very beautifully painted as always charmaine golden pen dear friend
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:57:00 PM
Reading this makes a calm come over me.
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:22:00 PM
I am late to the game and everyone has given you high praise -- I add my small voice of praise -- lovely dear lady.
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Date: 1/4/2015 6:15:00 PM
Excellent as always char, you write romance with ease.
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Date: 1/4/2015 5:09:00 PM
What a GEM, so beautiful, makes me want to sail away with you. Thanks for your comments on my work. Have a great and bountiful 2015, cheers Kev
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Date: 1/4/2015 12:12:00 PM
- Oh ... so beautiful poem, Charmaine ... with perfect picture - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2015 10:20:00 AM
Yes...a very elegant and charming poem...wonderfully put!! :) john.
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Date: 1/4/2015 9:35:00 AM
Charm you charm. Great love poem. Perfect 7+Love. Friend rajat
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Date: 1/4/2015 9:20:00 AM
Lovely poem, Charma. I remember this one. I'm glad that the pic thingy worked for you. Hugs
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:29:00 AM
A 7 rating Charm! Beautiful and romantic...somewhat sad and lonely...touching...as if you look for something that eludes a wanting heart. I would call this poetic escapism. All the best and take care. // paul
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:51:00 AM
A very beautiful piece and I love the accompanying photo...hugs Tim
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