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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ some days are set before us unordered-- go where the river leads

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/31/2024 7:37:00 AM
I am a wanderer Sara. I will follow that river to ?? who knows. I like the unordered aspect of life, the adventure. You have set my heart pulsing LOL :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/31/2024 4:34:00 PM
aww, what thoughtful words...I'm grateful my poem sparked your spirit of adventure...I'm a wanderer, too, but not so much so now that I'm getting older...it was fun! have a great evening, Sara
Date: 1/31/2024 7:24:00 AM
I like the simplicity of this style which still conveys so much. Enjoyed it.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/31/2024 4:33:00 PM
what a kind thing to say, Nancy! Thank you! Sara
Date: 1/30/2024 1:15:00 PM
a really awesome message in this itty bitty poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 5:44:00 PM
thanks for commenting on my itty bitty poem :-) Grateful for your visits and support, hugs, Sara
Date: 1/30/2024 12:46:00 PM
Very true, a deep analogy my friend..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 5:44:00 PM
thank you, Silent One...enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 1/30/2024 1:43:00 AM
to meditate , rivers lead to the oceans, anywhere , anytime, this is so intresting to think about yout poem thanks poet
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 5:12:00 AM
thank you for sharing your thoughts, Yann. I'm grateful my poem led to some pondering :-) Have a splendid day, Sara
Date: 1/29/2024 8:20:00 PM
So outstanding...Thank you for Sharing your work.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 5:11:00 AM
thank you, Joyce. I appreciate your visit and your kindness. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 1/29/2024 7:19:00 PM
Sounds like a moving experience to me, Sara. ~ Floe Rance Nightingale
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 5:11:00 AM
well 'floe rance,' my your day flow smoothly :-)
Date: 1/29/2024 7:11:00 PM
Be brave...letting spirit guide one. Believing we are water-pearls of a flow, loyal and all powerful that only wants the best us. Profound write.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 5:10:00 AM
thank you, Joe, for your perspective and thoughts. Appreciate you, Sara
Date: 1/29/2024 6:49:00 PM
This Monoku demonstrates exquisite skills, offering profound introspection and captivating imagery that permeates the entire piece. I sincerely appreciate the guidance provided, allowing the thoughts to flow freely like a meandering river.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 5:10:00 AM
aww, thank you kind Sotto for your complimentary words. I'm grateful my poem offered introspection and guidance. May your day 'flow' with creativity and happiness, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 1/29/2024 5:57:00 PM
The image is a lovely match for your lovely monoku, Sara. A wise statement, my truelove. Bears Hugs, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/30/2024 5:09:00 AM
thank you, dear hubby, for visiting and for your kind words...hugs back, Sara

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