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Where Somewhere Is Tomorrow

Let me run again, through the tall, amber grass, where sunbeams slope like stairways, and where tomorrow waits, at the top of the stairs.
____________________________________________________ 1/8/15 For the contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud "Somewhere" By Carrie Richards (30 syllables)

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Date: 1/15/2015 1:43:00 AM
And back again wid big congrats on this awesome win Carrie!
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Date: 1/15/2015 12:41:00 AM
very nice, as always, Carrie. BIG congrats.
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Date: 1/14/2015 9:28:00 PM
Love this Carrie, somewhere out there.... Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:18:00 AM
Lovely thought and beautifully expressed ( A very rare combination), Congrats my dear........
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Date: 1/14/2015 9:34:00 AM
Congrats!!-]RAJAT
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Date: 1/14/2015 2:53:00 AM
kudos Carrie.. :)!
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:10:00 PM
Still a first place for me, Carrie...congrats on your win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:33:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win, Carrie. very creative visual
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Date: 1/13/2015 7:03:00 PM
Love the visual you create here...congrats Carrie
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:34:00 PM
-where tomorrow waits at the top of the stairs-love that line! great win! u rock
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:38:00 PM
Beautifully penned Carrie Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:01:00 PM
Hi Carrie, stopping back to say congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/13/2015 12:58:00 PM
congratulations Carrie on this fine write and win
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Date: 1/12/2015 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful vision in your words, Carrie. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/12/2015 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful, Carrie! The imagery and metaphors are beyond incredible. A fav for me and I predict first place...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/10/2015 6:10:00 PM
Beautiful verse Carrie. GL in the contest... Verlena
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Date: 1/10/2015 9:23:00 AM
Lots said in one sentence.
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Date: 1/8/2015 9:25:00 PM
Yes future waiting at the top of stairs,, very positive thought Carrie! gl in contest!
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Date: 1/8/2015 8:50:00 PM
where tomorrow waits at the top of the stairs...that's a very nice line..good poem ..good luck in nette's contest
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Date: 1/8/2015 8:23:00 PM
I like this -- delightful! 7
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