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Where Once I Walked

Where once I walked I now idly talk Where once I ran I lie down to tan Where once I laughed I now am daft Where once I slept I now resurrect Where once I dreamed I now apply cold cream

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Date: 9/22/2022 8:38:00 AM
Cold cream in the shadows..ahem, I digress! You gave me a good laugh…where once I laughed, now I am daft. As older people we size up people from many angles. How funny I saw a meme that was supposed to read angels and instead said angles…lol! Getting back the sillies, thankfully! Keep me laughing, dear friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/22/2022 10:49:00 PM
One Kim Rodrigues... started with angels... pivoted to angles... and then entered Lost Angeles, courtesy of THE TWILIGHT ZONE.~ Doo-doo doo-doo; doo-doo, doo-doo...daaaaaaaaah!
Date: 9/21/2022 6:03:00 PM
It is reassuring to read your humorous poem Gershon on getting old. I am at the stage I count the bits of me that are left. Keep smiling, Shirley
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/22/2022 10:51:00 PM
Well, there's always a remedy for staying whole, I say: Go to any surgeon and tell him: Cut me to pieces. For the right price, how many of these so-called Doctors would refuse today?!
Date: 9/21/2022 6:18:00 AM
Cute and clever gw! laf
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Date: 9/22/2022 10:55:00 PM
Clever, clover, cleaver. I miss Leave it to Wally.
Date: 9/20/2022 7:58:00 PM
Left you one on this one
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Date: 9/20/2022 11:01:00 AM
And yet your mind is still a still trap GW! Maybe next you'll rap!! Happy Tuesday !
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Date: 9/20/2022 12:30:00 PM
I didn't include my 'mind,' Mike, because during a recent CAT Scan, the machine couldn't locate a brain... Oh, well. lol. Keep smiling, my friend. :) gw
Date: 9/20/2022 5:41:00 AM
Time has its effects on us Gershon. I hear you my friend...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/20/2022 6:40:00 PM
Time has been both a friend and an 'enemy.' I try to block out the enemy stuff. :) gw
Date: 9/20/2022 3:06:00 AM
I’m unfamiliar with this scenario, GW… ever since I changed 1959 to 1989 on my birth certificate. I would have gone with 1999 but you can’t change a 5 to a 9. C’est la vie.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/20/2022 6:43:00 PM
That's right, Terry. That's why we work '9 to 5' and not '5 to 9.' heh, heh! C'est la guerre.
Date: 9/20/2022 12:38:00 AM
Signs of getting on in years but you're certainly not alone Gershon. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/20/2022 6:48:00 PM
'Getting on in years?' Do you mean 'Getting it on this year?!' For sure! :) gw

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