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Where is Love

Sometimes I feel alone
Like a kitten, abandoned in a small cardboard box on the side of a dusty back-road. 
Sometimes I feel unloved
Like an orphan with no parents to call their own.
Sometimes I feel invisible
Like an arctic rabbit in a field of endless ice and snow. 
But most of all...
I feel unloved
Because who could love that arctic rabbit in the field of snow?
Who could love a kitten who had been long forgotten in its small little cardboard box?
And who could love an orphan who had never known what it was like to be loved? 
No one, that's who.
And in the end, all I have left is the beating of my broken heart to put me to sleep at night. 
Because, who, who could love me?

Copyright © Jasmine Elizabeth

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  1. Date: 7/23/2012 1:43:00 AM
    Hey Jasmine-Lovely poem(sad but lovely). I love how you've equated the feeling of feeling unloved to an orphan, an artic rabbit and an abandoned kitten -it paints the picture more clearly. Nice!

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 4:45:00 PM
    yes you can use the idea!! soupmail me and i will give you my email so we can talk back and forth.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 5:03:00 AM
    This poem is so very sad. I hope that you will soon find someone that loves you. Take care, Jancarl

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 9:00:00 PM
    this is a very good piece. i hope that you don't feel that you are not loved or have ever been in a situation with that feeling. i have felt this so this hits home just a little. hope to read more. feel free to read more of mine. i have been collaberating my poetry for twelve years and i write one poem everyday my hands would be broke if i typed them all!!!!

    Elizabeth Avatar Jasmine Elizabeth
    Date: 7/21/2012 10:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I am sorry to say, I do feel unloved. That is why I wrote this poem. I commented on your poem that you posted today. Also, I LOVE your idea of posting a poem a day. Don't suppose you'd mind if I used that idea?