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I was going through some of my notebooks yesterday and found this story my husband had wrote. I am not sure when it was written, so there is no date. I just had to share. I just couldn't resist writing a  Senryu to go with it. 

10/14/1943 - 8/29/2018

 

 

 

I am scared, and I have never been scared in my life. We lost our radio, radar, and other electronic navigation gear when we came through the Bermuda Triangle. One of the old salts aboard this rusty gray bucket of bolts they call a tramp steamer said, we must have offended King Neptune. It is a known fact that the ship cheated Davy Jones' Locker three times when it was running convoys during WWII. Where the storm came from, no one knows! Thirty-foot waves of blue-green foamy water are breaking over the bow flooding the main deck and throwing a salty mist spray over the bridge. The off-duty watch are confined to their racks for safety while the ship bobs and rolls like a roller coaster in the trough of the waves. Many lie there and pray as they listen to the moans and groans of the ship-expansion joints as the ship twist from side to side. Some of the sounds, sound human and I'm not so sure that they're not. I felt as if someone was calling me to come and join them in the briny deep. By: Poet Sonny Roper lacking gallantry heave round in Satan's abyss death clock off duty By Poet 8/17/2021

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Date: 9/3/2021 8:04:00 AM
An exciting full of action winning poem. Congratulations on greatness team work. Smartly done.
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Date: 9/2/2021 2:42:00 PM
Eve, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance
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Date: 9/1/2021 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Wonderful picture. I love all of it. Seas can be deadly. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 8/20/2021 11:19:00 PM
Eve, how lovely that in the end this has became a joint effort between the two of you, you have helped to make sure his words are not forgotten, by all accounts a hallowing story, with a dramatic picture, and a Senryu that as articulates the whole feelings and depth of the story, scary stuff, but, loved it . . . : )
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Date: 8/19/2021 12:24:00 AM
So deep and powerful... Your husband had written a beautiful dreadful story and you have written a powerful haiku in the end... This is a special haibun...
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/31/2021 11:15:00 AM
thank you for those wonderful words hugs
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 8/20/2021 11:07:00 AM
Don't worry... He will be reading this now and smiling beside you...
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/19/2021 9:14:00 PM
Thank you, Supraga, for your kind words. I should had found it along time again. It breaks my heart that he didn't share if he did I don't remember.
Date: 8/18/2021 12:22:00 PM
wow, that is so powerful, Eve . he really captured the feeling of danger and you capped it off wonderfully!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/19/2021 9:18:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 8/18/2021 8:26:00 AM
Wow so great you found your husbands notes and thus inspired to write this awesome Haibun - I'm certain he is very proud of this tribute and your talent. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Please go to Soupmail
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Date: 8/17/2021 5:09:00 PM
Wonderful Haibun, associated with a lovely tribute to your husband. May he RIP
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Date: 8/17/2021 5:05:00 PM
What a wonderful find Eve, a treasure your husband left behind. A lovely memorial tribute… Belle
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Date: 8/17/2021 2:48:00 PM
such vivid description Eve, so glad you found it and posted it, I remember the fun I had writing limericks with sonny, :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2021 10:01:00 AM
What a collaboration, Eve. So many images. Reminds me of the turbulence of life. Hugs
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Date: 8/17/2021 8:58:00 AM
Wow, what a terrifying experience Eve, so many ships and aircraft have met with tragic consequences in that area of the Bermuda Triangle. Tom
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