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Where Is God's Kingdom

Some say that God’s kingdom is in the sky, or in the sea The birds would reach the sky before you, the small fish would have found it The kingdom is in us and outside us, we’re children of its king A poem based on a translation of the Gospel of Thomas (the language of the work being Coptic).

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/14/2021 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win. You created a lovely spiritual poem! Thank you for participating. Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/13/2021 9:50:00 PM

Short yet very sweetly done work. Congratulations!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/11/2021 8:27:00 AM

Fine penning David, indeed God's kingdom is within those of us who are born of God's spirit. Keep spiritually wtiting. Blessings, Gordon

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2021 4:57:00 AM

I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. I like the theme of faith. Sara

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/14/2021 1:57:00 AM

A blessed sharing, David, for eyes to see, minds to acknowledge, and hearts to hold! Nicely done my friend, Aloha!

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/8/2021 5:07:00 AM

Absolutely! We are made of God. Otherwise He would not be the the 4 Omin's. We can only seperate ourselves from God consciously. It is our own choice -- and an illusion.