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Out in a pretty meadow running free, where laughing, we fall down in the clover, or even better, down beside the sea watching as the brilliant sun sets over the village that we have been visiting - a quaint idyllic European place. I picture it is summer or late spring because the sun has bronzed your handsome face. And somewhere else I want so much to go - upon a cruise with such fun things to do - stop at exotic spots or see a show aboard the ship, then eat and dance till two. It matters not the place so much as this - I want to go someplace that we can kiss! March 12, 2017 for Nicola Byrne's Where I Want to Go Contest

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Date: 4/13/2018 10:01:00 PM
A fun poem, Andrea.
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Date: 5/9/2017 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and a great flow. Excellent write, Andrea! Regards, John.
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Date: 4/3/2017 4:31:00 PM
Beautiful and so true how you dream of the place for rendezvous, yet the place means nothing without the Kiss.. Love it :)
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Date: 3/22/2017 1:55:00 PM
Ha! Andrea, this is mighty darn good. : )
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Date: 3/20/2017 9:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 3/17/2017 6:27:00 PM
I'll go! We'd have to forego the kissing part, but I'd love to frolic as you described and have always dreamed of a cruise - somewhere tropical. I enjoyed this very much. Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/17/2017 8:24:00 AM
Ever the romantic. Love love love this.
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Date: 3/17/2017 12:40:00 AM
So sweet and romantic, Andrea! It reminds me of how much I would love to travel with my husband someday. Sending lots of luck and hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/16/2017 9:35:00 PM
love the sentiment....my ship was an aircraft carrier and it took me around the world, I was young so I looked for kisses on shore..good luck in the contest
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Date: 3/15/2017 10:17:00 PM
EXCEPTIONAL CONTEST ENTRY AND BEAUTIFUL VERSES. I remember when young, always looking for a private place to deliver a kiss. Back then both parties were shy..A7
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Date: 3/15/2017 5:37:00 PM
A romantic write Andrea..best wishes
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Date: 3/15/2017 5:06:00 AM
Ahhh ever the romantic soul Andrea. Lovely! 7 ; )
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Date: 3/14/2017 8:28:00 PM
Very beautiful madam Sonnetier ....
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Date: 3/14/2017 9:57:00 AM
Like your romantic wishing, Andrea:)
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Date: 3/13/2017 5:12:00 PM
Lovely poem of loving expressions.
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Date: 3/13/2017 2:50:00 PM
I love all the places you mentioned.I still never went on a cruise..It is in my bucket list...and to go where ocean or nature is ..that would be a bliss..And you can kiss..Sshh..Exceptional..a fave.
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Date: 3/13/2017 11:55:00 AM
It's a fortunate man that you afford such luxury, best wishes in the contest...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/13/2017 2:46:00 PM
Charlie, of course I do not go to all these places. haha. I am lucky to get a trip to Wendover, Nevada!!
Date: 3/13/2017 4:56:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Contest or no contest this entry stands on its own. The sonnet is in marvelous form. Your chosen place is a grand choice always. Your entry throughout is beautiful. Best of luck with the contest.
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Date: 3/12/2017 10:53:00 PM
If only I had met someone as you!!!! :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/13/2017 2:46:00 PM
You are sweet!
Date: 3/12/2017 8:25:00 PM
A lovely sonnet, Andrea! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/12/2017 8:01:00 PM
Nice trip with romance I need to do this... Good luck in the contest...The young lady I wrote about is on my facebook page her name is Kristina Rose, a wonderful young lady Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/12/2017 6:54:00 PM
This is lovely Andrea. I can see you dreaming in the sunshine of the perfect place. Nicely done. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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Date: 3/12/2017 6:38:00 PM
Now this sweet! A lovely write.
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Date: 3/12/2017 2:14:00 PM
Lovely romantic sonnet, Andrea - good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/12/2017 1:35:00 PM
This is so dreamy Andrea :-) Such effortless flow and so full of joy..one can almost see a sunny halo guiding you with a few pretty butterflies flitting about :-) Pure poetry, beautiful writing. A fave, 7++++ blessings, lynn
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