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We're all born with the same hopes found in the heart of a child. For in our youth, innocence embodied humanity. But we're taught souls separate humans from all animals. And God gave Man dominion over all creatures on Earth. Man shares a proclivity for waging war and mayhem. And anxiety fuels fragmented fantasy dreams. Some souls, mired in depression, sink to where hope cannot rise. Yet, we ignore the anguish of those drowning in despair. Christians tout Armageddon as righteous retribution. But Satan's more amused than shocked; by their audacity. Heaven is assigned the role of a posthumous reward. And labeled as blasphemy, truth gets routinely ignored. (Blank Verse) 6/11/2015

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Date: 3/4/2018 10:46:00 PM
Love the imagery started in your first stanza, Emile, and becoming stronger as the poem progresses... "Yet we've a proclivity for waging war and mayhem." "Yet Satan’s more amused than shocked by their audacity." Wow. Very strong poem.
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support and encouragement my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/12/2015 12:56:00 PM
So true Emil truth are routinely ignored that lead some souls mired in depression and sink to were hope cannot rise. Beautiful penned friend..........A.M.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/12/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Afolabi, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 6/11/2015 7:55:00 PM
There will always be the lost souls searching and it is up to the more enlightened beings to help guide them toward that elusive hope and faith. I enjoyed your poem Emile. I have faith in Divine intervention. Blessings, Connie
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/12/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I truly appreciate your support and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 6/11/2015 5:07:00 PM
so sad to think there is a place ...where hope cannot rise...there are still wonderful people out there willing to offer a helping hand. very sad but well written piece...cheers H
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/11/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Huberta, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.

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