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Where Frozen Embers Still Burn

We huddled ‘neath a hand-made afghan When it was just eight-below outside Beside the brick fireplace with my man Less than a year since I was his bride Hopes and dreams we shared that bitter night His arms ‘round me; all seemed possible Recalling our vows before firelight Our matching rings shone, our love's symbol There’d never be another for me We thought all of our dreams would come true We had no insight of what would be Never knowing we’d soon bid adieu He now finds warmth in heaven’s light My heart knows he’ll not be returning But recalling this night brings delight Even with frozen embers burning
*August 18, 2015

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Date: 6/9/2016 12:36:00 AM
How well you visit the frailty of humanity and the eternal power of love on us here Carolyn..'
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Date: 8/29/2014 5:22:00 AM
Sentimental feelings well penned, Carolyn. congrats
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Date: 8/28/2014 9:48:00 PM
Hugs, your poem brings tears to my soul, written with love, well done sweet girl.
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Date: 8/28/2014 8:22:00 PM
Oh, Carolyn, so very sad, and I feel for your loss. But how wonderfully you have created this beautiful tribute. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Sandra
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Date: 8/28/2014 5:05:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2014 4:42:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, This is a well crafted entry. Very nice images and poetics. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Have a pleasant evening. Earl
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Date: 8/28/2014 4:05:00 PM
Beautiful tribute Carolyn... Congratulations on your 1st place win... Verlena
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Date: 8/28/2014 3:10:00 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to your love, Carolyn. Congratulations on your #1 win.
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Date: 8/28/2014 1:13:00 PM
Very sad yet so beautiful. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/20/2014 11:33:00 PM
A beautiful Quatrain, Carolyn! Though it's sad, the memories are a special gift, like a bouquet of your favorite flowers. How are you? This is a Winner for sure! Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/18/2014 4:33:00 PM
we all have known lost love but very few know what its like to lose their love..when reading a poem of this nature I have no base line from which to draw only my own emotion that is imagined...I can only think that it would be a hole that could never be repaired or filled..so it is brave of you to relieve and share with this beautiful poem..of all the poems I've read for this contest...you win...
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/19/2014 1:41:00 AM
You would have liked John, Frederic. Everyone did. He ties with my father for the best man I've ever known. Thanks for your kind words.
Date: 8/18/2014 5:30:00 AM
Adore this write of yours Carolyn ! Superb especially the final stanza makes it perfect to the theme! Sure winner !Best wishes for contest!
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Date: 8/18/2014 4:37:00 AM
Magnificent! Gail will adore this write Carolyn! I particularly love the sentiment in the final stanza and 'he now finds warmth in heaven's light' Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/18/2014 4:25:00 AM
ohh thoughts of lost beautiful love could still be a delight, it' s true...love this splendid write, Carolyn
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