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Where Frozen Embers Still Burn

We lose hope, drowning in dope, not knowing the strength deep within our breath. We carry energy of a thousand suns, in every, hurt, humiliation, and suspicions of following the wrong "path", that could lead to "death." We wait for time to heal our hearts, so as to forget all life's hurts, but the pain becomes too much to handle; problems become too complex to handle. The skies we stare for a sign; an answer to perfectly align with our desires, only for silence to return to haunt our conscience. It is only our attitude that we need to change, so as to get divine power as our wage!

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Date: 2/25/2019 7:53:00 AM
You express the harsh realities beautifully in this piece Teddy. Congratulations on having it featured! : ) xxoo
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Date: 2/25/2019 5:11:00 AM
great writings
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Date: 8/29/2014 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Teddy, for this fine placement,
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/30/2014 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta! :)
Date: 8/28/2014 3:55:00 PM
Dear Teddy, all of those hurts, humiliations and suspicions bring on the pain you describe. You sum up the remedy very well in your last two lines. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/29/2014 3:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for enjoying my work and applauding me Carolyn! ^_^ Regards, Teddy.
Date: 8/28/2014 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations, Teddy, on your winning placement.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/29/2014 3:29:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause Faye! ^_^
Date: 8/15/2014 12:40:00 PM
Wow Teddy a unique n brilliant write! Good luck!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/16/2014 4:21:00 AM
Thank you very much for your ever kind comments Dr. Upma! ^_^

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