Where Freedom Finds the Fire

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Recovery reigned beyond lure and fire and ice then to baptismal pool. Sponsor: Jusin Bordner Contest Name: "Where Freedom Finds The Fire" Deadline: 4/26/16

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/12/2016 11:46:00 PM

Iris, an enchanting and esoteric haiku, so lovely, so deep.

Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 4/15/2016 3:01:00 PM

And you also Iris :-)

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/15/2016 8:15:00 AM

Thanks Lenny. finding my way to you. Have a wonderful weekend.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/8/2016 1:44:00 AM

You thought outside the box with this contest, Iris. It's the fire of recovery that sparks the soul to salvation! Justin doesn't pick too many winners (only 3 and the rest are Honorable Mentions), but I love participating in them nonetheless because the themes are always very vague, it gets your mind going. I liked your brevity ... a lot of thought in few words.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/8/2016 11:14:00 AM

Thanks Timo. I C U wrote a winner for water...

Paul Callus

Date: 4/6/2016 9:22:00 AM

This is a lovely creative haiku, Iris; having said that, I have the feeling that Justin would be looking out for longer writes; of course I could be wrong! ~ Regards // paul

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/7/2016 8:24:00 AM

Okay, Paul. Perhaps so, but it's too late for more, yes. I must check.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2016 8:12:00 PM

Iris, deep for a haiku. LINDA

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/2/2016 6:16:00 AM

Let's c what become of it. Thanks dear one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/30/2016 2:52:00 PM

- A great haiku, Iris - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/2/2016 6:20:00 AM

Thanks Anne. We'll c what happens to it.