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Where Else Would I Be?

Author Note: When reading, picture the beauty of a setting sun at sea. Steadfast, surveying in appreciation the mastery of creation. A kaleidoscope of color, blends one into another, producing varying intensities, fluid, wispy, in the aftermath of sun setting; a vision, a rustic portrait of my vessel rushing, as to prolong this rare site. Water mimics glass, nary a ripple before me; changes to chaotic in my wake. I am enchanted by the feast placed before me, fortunate among men to bear witness. This portal between heaven and earth, this is my place. I am a sailor, where else would I be?

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Date: 1/28/2010 7:14:00 AM
Just revisiting this one,Marty. Where are all the comments for this amazingly beautiful one of yours?? Believe me, MY soap opera has YOUR wife's soap opera beat ten times over. YOu don't know my husband. hahaha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/27/2010 2:16:00 PM
This line to describe smooth water, priceless: Water mimics glass, Great write, particularly for all water lovers! I always liked it kind of choppy when we had our boat long ago. It was like a ride at an amusement park, with me up there at the very front! Luv, andrea
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