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Where Echoes Live

I've built a land where echoes live Just remnants of my past Where future things just fade away And are destined not to last Surrounded by my broken things Things that I destroyed Pieces that I've thrown away Things I can't avoid Miles of mountains built on hope With slopes too high to climb A place that's ever standing still A land with no more time A place where dreams are out of reach A mist that's here then gone A land where loneliness grows out of the ground And there's no such thing as dawn I've built a land where echoes live That's ever changing shape A land I've built with my own hands A place I can't escape

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/13/2012 8:21:00 AM
Outstanding piece, my friend. Very sad and hopeless situation. Excellent write. Great job. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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