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Where Did You Go

I woke up crying again, I realize you are gone I am in the chair again, I have not moved in days I can't eat again the food has no taste I keep asking everyone where are you ...no answer I look in our room and the bed is empty ...nothing in the closest...where are you? I woke up no smell of you in our bed ...your body not next to me...no good morning kiss ...where did you go? I really don't know. I don't remember...where did you go ?.... I keep looking on the phone, it won't ring ...searching for your number, it's not there ....where did it go? who is that next to you? why are your arms around her? Oh...now I remember... you left with her you said she was a better fit ...no you didn't say ...I saw ...you kissed her ...yes now I remember...you love her ...not me...where did we go?

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Date: 10/27/2016 2:48:00 PM
Sonya,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Sonya Stewart
Date: 10/27/2016 5:01:00 PM
thanks so much ...I am happy to be here
Date: 10/25/2016 3:07:00 PM
**SonyaStewart,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sonya Stewart
Date: 10/25/2016 3:18:00 PM
thank you so much..I needed a space ...I just need to speak , I want to learn and grow here. I am happy for the help and yes I will read your all poems ...give me time.
Date: 10/25/2016 8:53:00 AM
Hi Sonia, You have penned such a deep emotional write. It felt so real. You drew reader in with each and every word. I felt the devastation and I wanted to know where he had gone. This is a good debut poem. I would like to extend you a friendly welcome to Poety Soup. It's a place where you can learn and grow from other poets like you. It's also a place to make new friends.When you get the time stop by my page:-)Alexis
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Sonya Stewart
Date: 10/25/2016 9:21:00 AM
thanks Alexis ...I sure will stop by
Date: 10/20/2016 10:38:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........
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Date: 10/20/2016 6:48:00 PM
Good expression. That really shows true heartbreak. May the heart mend.
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