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Where Did We Go Wrong

Where did we go wrong what happen to the love we had why must it be this way fussing and fighting Where did we go wrong was our love so perfect that it had to be tainted Where did we go wrong did it need flaws to be perfect Where did we go wrong i was good to you what happen where did we go wrong i found love in you and you found love me Where did we go wrong was my love so loud that i could not here you cry Where did we go wrong when you cry your hart becomes weak for that person move in. Where did we go wrong people ask me why do you love her she made me fill good about my self she lift my sprits she made me fill like a man. Where did we go wrong maybe my love was so blinding i could not see what was going on Where did we go wrong Where did i go wrong Where did we go wrong Where did i go wrong did i not love you enough Where did i go wrong did i not be there for you Where did i go wrong did i not care for you Where did i go wrong twenty years gone by Where did i go wrong i never cheated Where did i go wrong i always been faithful Where did i go wrong Where did we go wrong? By reginald conyers My frist poem Fin.

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Date: 10/7/2010 7:56:00 AM
wow how nice very good first poem enjoyed faleshia
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:56:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Reginald. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 8:40:00 PM
"was my love so loud that i could not hear you cry" that is a great line among a beautiful first poem! keep it up
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:17:00 PM
Very passionate write on the feelings of love, Reginald
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:22:00 PM
Sorry about the love loss in your life..Sometimes it is hard to trace it back to where the problems started..Hope through your writing that you find what the problems were..Sara
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