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Where Did the Years Go

Remember years ago, when you were fit Now you can't stand too long, before you have to sit And all the times that you ran to catch your bus Now it just passes by and you stand and cuss. In the days gone by you'd eat like a horse Now when you go out it's only one course And much smaller bites when you do eat Because your sweet tooth has cost you your teeth. And the beautiful body you had as a young teen Now when you go to the beach, you hope you're not seen And tying your laces it's hard if your tall You have to rise slowly because you might fall. You go up to your bed feeling alright Chances are you'll be up in the night Having an accident is something you dread So you put plastic sheets all over your bed. And your eyes are not as good as they used to be So you have to wear glasses just so you can see But it's not all gloom there is the odd perk You can stay in bed later, because you don't have to work. And you've been through life you're wiser too When your family need advice they'll come to you So burn the candle both ends, just have a ball And enjoy your life until you get the call. Written 1ST February 2018. ( POTD 2/2/2018) For POTD Poetry contest Sponsored by Richard Lamoureux. I remember receiving a comment congratulating me and I must be honest was gobsmacked to receive the honour of POTD. From the comments I received I could see that many on soup could identify with some of the things I had mentioned in my poem. The general feeling to sum up was ( GETTING ON IN YEARS SUCKS BIG TIME ) so we really have to make the most of what time we have left on earth. P.S. have read your verse 'Broken People'

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Date: 6/7/2020 10:13:00 AM
I can see, Tom, why this poem is so popular, having recently turned 73--when I was young I thought my grandparents and all old people were 'quaint and cute'--I had no idea how damn hard it is getting old, and how unreal to have a young mind in an old body....
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Date: 6/7/2020 2:02:00 PM
Thank you L. J., I know exactly what you mean, those oldies were dinasaurs lol, I'm not to far behind you, every day a new ache comes after you've been doing something strenuous and you forget your not 20 any more. Tom
Date: 5/31/2020 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations on the POTD win. Now, you should not be surprised, methinks you know how well you do write. Although, I bet many of us wonder if we really are good enough. I am one of those. This is a perfect poem. I can relate well to it. People younger fear these aches and pains. They want to be young forever! You know the golden gifts of aging. They have NO clue. Hanging on to Youth, not realizing it does leave. -)) Panagiota xoxo
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Date: 5/31/2020 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota, our fountain of youth has dried up a bit, but our minds are still young, I don't think I'll ever grow up lol. Tom
Date: 5/28/2020 9:19:00 AM
I didn't get to read it back then...so glad you reposted for this contest. Congrats again.
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Date: 5/28/2020 10:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Jeanne, I know advancing years can bring problems but we're a lot wiser. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 5/3/2019 8:34:00 AM
It was my pleasure Tom so I can enjoy excellent poetry like this one.
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 4/28/2019 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserving win in this contest Tom and a belated congratulations on your POTD! I can relate so well. My husband and I always complain to each other how much it sucks getting old. The best part is that we are at home to enjoy our grandchildren. xxoo
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Date: 4/28/2019 7:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie, my brother once said when you reach 40 bits start dropping off, he wasn't joking. But yes we have wisdom and beautiful grandchildren. Tom.
Date: 4/27/2019 6:10:00 PM
Tom, a belated congrats for your POTD honor for this poem, and current congratulations for your win in this contest! I can so much relate with all the feelings you convey in your well-written poem! Sandra
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Date: 4/28/2019 1:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandra, sadly many of us can relate to some of the things in my verse, but that's life I suppose. Tom
Date: 4/25/2019 9:31:00 AM
So glad you entered my contestso I can enjoy this piece. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest Tom.
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Date: 4/25/2019 9:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Richard, glad you enjoyed it. Thanks too for hosting. Regards. Tom.
Date: 9/28/2018 2:27:00 AM
Fabulous poem! So true. read my poem "Testosterone" if you get a chance. Best wishes to you and yours
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Date: 9/28/2018 2:39:00 AM
Haha , getting on on years sucks big time.
Date: 7/15/2018 11:24:00 AM
Tom, what an enjoyable read - you injected a lot of wonderful humour on this stage of life! At the same time, I hate to admit that I can identify with most of the sentiments here -LOL! Just an excellent write! Hugs and congratulations on your POTD! Pandita
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Date: 7/15/2018 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Pandita, glad you enjoyed it, no one enjoys getting on on years so we might as well have a laugh or two about it. Tom
Date: 6/21/2018 8:09:00 PM
and a very belated congrats on the POTD
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Date: 6/22/2018 1:30:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 6/21/2018 8:08:00 PM
Your second best one I had not seen yet, but I see it garnered a POTD a while back. For me it's your best of the two. I really love this one. I am STARTING to relate to it more than I'd like to . haha. Excellent verse (I have written a few on old age too. it's a fun topic)
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Date: 6/22/2018 1:44:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, funny though how the years creep up on you and things you once did with ease take a bit more effort and when you get up in the morning you creak a bit more and it will happen to us all so we might as well treat it with a bit of humour. Tom
Date: 5/16/2018 2:23:00 PM
So bang on it hurts!!! Good one man!!! YEE HAW!
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Date: 5/16/2018 2:29:00 PM
Glad you liked it jack. Getting on in years sucks big time.
Date: 3/2/2018 8:57:00 AM
Hello Tom, I like the last verse of your poem. Some of us wear glassess early in life. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/2/2018 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Darlene, yes been wearing glasses a few years now , couldn't see without them.Have a good weekend. Tom
Date: 2/11/2018 4:08:00 PM
Your poem was an absolute delight to read. :)
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Date: 2/11/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thank you Carol, these things might eventually catch up with us all, hopefully not too soon Regards Tom
Date: 2/7/2018 4:41:00 PM
I just love this write! Some of the things written I have experienced :)
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Date: 2/7/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Valerie, I tried to create a picture of getting older in a lighthearted way, don't worry, you're not alone ,many of the things will affect us all eventually. Regards Tom.
Date: 2/4/2018 3:37:00 AM
The tooth of time becomes gums to chew with, but the hunger to write can still be voracious. I like your poem. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/4/2018 3:48:00 AM
Thank you Kai, I'm pleased you liked it. Regards Tom
Date: 2/3/2018 3:47:00 AM
Tom, I couldn't let the day pass without letting you know what a great truism you have penned. Withe Lord's Blessing, I'll be 75 on St. Patrick's Day. I won a twist contest at age 17 and again at 67. I don't see that happening again in the foreseeable future. The alternative really isn't as bad as it may seem. I'll be singing bass with J.D. Sumner in the Heavenly Choir!! Thanks for such a great POTD.
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Date: 2/3/2018 4:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Curtis, I sometimes forget my age and still think I'm in my twenties, I suppose it's something we all do at times and worry about the aches after.And winning a twist comp at 67 is truly impressive and inspirational to us all. On St Patrick's day I'll raise a glass of Guinness to you on your 75th.I always try and keep the mind young and keep active I think it puts you in good stead for the future. Regards Tom
Date: 2/3/2018 12:19:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Tom, a life of true experience .
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Date: 2/3/2018 2:44:00 AM
Thank you Eve, We don't always get what we want as we get older, we just have to make the best of it. Regards Tom.
Date: 2/2/2018 7:29:00 PM
Very Good Poem
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Date: 2/3/2018 2:29:00 AM
Thank you Sean, glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom.
Date: 2/2/2018 6:52:00 PM
A big CONGRATULATIONS Tom on your poem being a POTD. I definitely can relate to it, a poorly 73, but taking life as it comes. Best regards... Mick
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Date: 2/3/2018 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Mick, you may have a head start but we're all catching you up.And yes we have to take what is dealt out to us and make the best if it. Regards Tom
Date: 2/2/2018 5:17:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem, and at 86 I can relate. A man was asked if he wore shorts or briefs, his answer was 'depends'. Fortunately I don't have to depend on depends as yet. blessings,Vivien
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Date: 2/3/2018 2:22:00 AM
Thank you Vivien, I suppose 'depends' awaits us all over the horizon lol. Glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom
Date: 2/2/2018 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your potd, Tom! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 2/2/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Akkina, Glad you enjoyed it. Regards Tom.
Date: 2/2/2018 12:18:00 PM
But there's no substitute for experience Tom, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 2/2/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Charlie, I agree, experience comes with age and hopefully great wisdom Regards Tom.
Date: 2/2/2018 12:04:00 PM
- Words of truth, Tom :) - (I have worked with "older" people in 35 years as a nurse ) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2018 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, Sadly as we get older our bodies creak more than they used to but your minds still in its teens. Regards Tom
Date: 2/2/2018 11:28:00 AM
Hi Tom, There is much truth in this well written piece. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/2/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, sadly when you have older relatives it does give you a glimpse over the horizon. Regards Tom.
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