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Where Are You

The sun  is shining Water is azure blue Lying by the poolside "where are you" The waterfall sends ripples Across the waters skin Saying I will relax you If you dare to come in. What an idyllic place To share a kiss or two To snuggle up together "where are you" I am eating a pavlova Covered with nuts and cream Have a drink in my hand But nothing is as it seems Cos i have just woken up To a cold autumn hue I am still asking  "Why weren't  you there too".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/14/2012 3:45:00 PM
An urging wanting of existence, of which we all enter, or walk with. Nicely crafted :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/14/2012 11:17:00 PM
Thank you James ...Seren
Date: 10/27/2012 8:12:00 PM
Beautiful poem Seren. I enjoyed reading it :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/14/2012 11:17:00 PM
Thank you Bethany...Seren
Date: 10/26/2012 2:14:00 PM
Enjoyed your lovely poem Seren. :-) Hazel
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/14/2012 11:16:00 PM
Thank you Hazel...Seren
Date: 10/26/2012 12:30:00 PM
Really good words and beautifully written. - Thank you. Have a enjoyable weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/14/2012 11:15:00 PM
Oops missed all the ones on here. Sorry or delayed thankmyou...Seren
Date: 10/26/2012 11:58:00 AM
Sounds wonderful, enjoyed your lovely poem, love Elizabeth
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/14/2012 11:16:00 PM
Thanks Elizabeth

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