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Where did you go While you were still right here Beside me? Where did you go? Long before your physical self left You were already gone. Where was I While you were drifting away? Where was I As you were wondering how to leave? How could I have not known? Once...I knew your every thought. Once...I knew you. But now I am not sure I even know myself. Where did you go While you were still right here?

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Date: 7/16/2010 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations Francine on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Free Verse". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Francine!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:41:00 PM
Enjoyed this, love Roger
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:40:00 PM
A nice write on self realization - physical self left but spiritual self still there.
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:27:00 PM
no sympathy needed , its just a memory from decades ago, both of us having moved on since.
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:23:00 PM
People drift away sometimes and we never know why they lost interest. It's hard to accept, Francine, and I'm sorry you're feeling this kind of pain now. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:22:00 PM
awh,, sweet write,, deep but it's their loss!!,..P.D.
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