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When Your Around X

Longingly waiting for your embrace Over and over my mind will race Vast and strong my heart shall pound Every time when your around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/19/2009 6:43:00 AM
You have said a lot in these four lines of rhyming couplets. Oh how love reaches within us. Nice poem. Keep writing. God Bless you and welcome to Poetry soup. Love, Dane
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