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When You Stand Alone

when you stand alone your knees want to give to real fears your eyes seem to see the most of agitation under trepidation but stand alone you do knowing you may not be standing for very long and still you stand with chest up high and a tremble in your voice and you shout freedom freedom freedom for all

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Date: 5/20/2017 12:49:00 PM
This is excellent, precised and highly intellectual. A huge 7 for me.
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Verlecia Fields
Date: 5/21/2017 10:06:00 AM
Thank you for your comment - I am glad you liked it -
Date: 5/19/2017 3:21:00 PM
- One thing we all should shout together, Verlecia - Great written - hugs // Sun :)
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Verlecia Fields
Date: 5/21/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thank you for your comment - I want that too *-)
Date: 5/16/2017 4:26:00 PM
I love the way you take a stand in this short but powerful poem Verlecia. Very well done:)
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Date: 5/21/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you (^.^)

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