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You wrap my name In syllables of love Passion tinged sound units Caressed by the beauty of your voice you leave me no choice but to yield.... breathed into my ear you release letter sojourners to travel down the curve of my neck to a cadence that captivates and my heart capitulates When you say my name.... When you say my name saturated in n~e~e~d wanting to be freed.... you make the appeal wanting healing...immediate...real your testosterone tempered tonality temptingly deep... it sets in motion Resonance reverberations that rock ecstasy's epicenter... my name comes again riding your waves of want... it comes in the full knowledge that my release of liquid love will welcome you in to the inner sanctum sanctuary where your body is idolized and your name chanted...immortalized in the rhythm and rhyme of passion sublime When you say my name... When you say my name you evoke the spirit of eternity to dance the dance of life weaving through and around two simple syllables of romantic antics dancing and swaying your voice calming playing the trace of romance leaving nothing to chance when you say my name.... when YOU say...MY...N*A*M*E* Eileen

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Date: 6/4/2015 9:19:00 AM
I am pleased this one is in the top 100 Eileen! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 5/14/2015 3:09:00 PM
How it's felt, more than how it's simply said. Verbalize the trials that hold judgments on our tomorrow. I wrap these vowels amongst your conjugated kiss. French. Dips. Say my name, no. Remember my name... ;-) Absolute kicking lines, Jade/Eileen/Awesome Lady. :D
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Date: 5/13/2015 12:38:00 PM
whoa...you're back to your mastered niche! I like the "testosterone tempered tonality" :-). Between you and FJ, the temperature in PS halls should never go below the warm level...A hot 7! Hugs! Kim :-)
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Date: 5/11/2015 10:04:00 AM
Your words paint the scene with descriptive words that bring the essence of your experience into our conscious mind and we can walk in your shoes for a short time and feel what you feel. Emile.
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:44:00 AM
Great comments Eileen!
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Date: 5/11/2015 12:06:00 AM
Loved this, and I guess this is a good time to say, you will always be "Eileen" to me, for some reason this name just so matches to who you are, no offense meant to poor Jade! LOL
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Date: 5/10/2015 7:59:00 PM
"When you say my name you evoke the spirit of eternity to dance the dance of life" What I really love about this poem is it is not just the physical - the sensuality wraps around father down than just the neck, but straight around the soul and into the soul...Brilliant.. always intense and exciting! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/10/2015 6:27:00 PM
Now you have returned. All of the joy and ecstasy of your poetry so sweet so inflamed with passion, carrying us along in the malestrom of your words. dear poetess i have so missed your sublime writing. love Shane xxx
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Date: 5/10/2015 11:25:00 AM
Awesome -- and I know you have a lot of names!! Liquid love -- wow, boy howdy!! I am dancing around the room . . . yelling your names . . . OK, OK . . . sitting down. . . well written, good flow, has a sweet taste of honey . . . OK -- it was fantastic! 7, fav
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2015 11:34:00 AM
Are you done your jig now??? ;) Boy Howdy....love to hear that Texan phrase from Coach. Yes, I do have many names.....I was thinking about it the other day. They all have special meaning to me. LO....a dear sweet one, David. ;) Loved your comment to me on the Storm...soft hands, eh? Nivea....!!! Love honey. Had half an avocado today drenched and honey with almonds all around. That's why we do it round here. ;) Miss ya. I'm doing some corrections...Will my life ever get back to NORMAL? Hugs
Date: 5/10/2015 9:32:00 AM
Ooooooh la la. This is hot Eileen! So good to see you back writing.
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:24:00 AM
Got my OOOOOHHHH LA LA from Mr Lamoureux. I'm happy as pie! ;) Hugs
Date: 5/10/2015 8:15:00 AM
Jade, oh this is magical, so soothing and captivating, I just flowed along 7, and thanks so much for visiting my poem, I am...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2015 10:25:00 AM
Broken Wings...thank YOU for that lovely post. I'm very touched. Hugs
Date: 5/10/2015 7:55:00 AM
EILLLEEEENN I say your name - a beautiful passionate write - love the alliteration and the flow of the words - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2015 10:26:00 AM
JAN.....aren't you a sweetie pie! Thanks...you took me high...in the sky and you KNOW why! Got to say BYE BYE! ;) Horrid day of corrections. I'm DYING!
Date: 5/10/2015 4:14:00 AM
What a magical spell you weave with your words !!! You have a poet's deep passionate heart and words flow so beautifully in poetic rhythm, captivating us with this great beauty of a write A 7..
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:27:00 AM
Magical spell? Aren't you so sweet, Nan! :) I'm glowing. Thank you, dear. I'll be by to visit you...Hugs

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