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When You Make Love To Me

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When you make love to me with spoken word Emblazoned body burns in ecstasy Desire’s cadence by my heart is heard And secret wants demand supremacy When you make love to me with wanton gaze A melody of moistness throbs within Your gnawing glances do ignite the craze Of body burning bright in sultry spin When you make love to me with mute caress Your hand usurps the moon and draws the flow Of inner tides that rush in to posses Your lips and mouth, a quenching to bestow When you make love to me you set her free Seductive Mistress of your fantasy Jade

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Shane Cooper

Date: 4/13/2015 6:37:00 AM

Hi again my Enchantress, I have had to visit this write again and it gets more impressive each time I read it. Absolutely magnificent write, every word perfectly placed. If it was a painting it would put Piccaso to shame. If you have not guessed I am enamoured of the piece. love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper

Date: 4/6/2015 9:13:00 AM

Sublime words from a passionate poetess. You ignite ones heart with such desire and need. I think that this is the best work of yours I have read, it is a masterclass in poetry. Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/7/2015 9:21:00 AM

Shane!! I've been searching for this post forever!! Thanks for visiting this piece. :) I don't know if this is the best I've ever written on sensuality. Give Make Love to Me a read. That's also passionate. Thank you for your kindness to me. It's always appreciate and always lights a candle in my heart. :) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/5/2015 9:56:00 AM

You are inspired! On to the next one!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/5/2015 11:48:00 AM

:) I wrote this a few days ago, but didn't post. Didn't think it appropriate, but....I let it loose today. :) Glad you read them all. Hugs, Richard.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/5/2015 3:25:00 AM

Hot, Hot, Hot, the queen of passion writes with a gorgeous pen tonight ;) love it!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/5/2015 5:10:00 AM

Hey, Sweetie!!!! I'm riding high this wave of passion!!! Thanks for the visit and the sweetness of your words. Hugs

David Meade

Date: 4/4/2015 9:44:00 PM

You made me smile tonight LO, your passion melts a hard heart!! Hope you have a blessed and wonderful Easter! Hugs! 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/4/2015 11:23:00 PM

:) Hey, David....So glad you're here. I've missed reading you. :( I hope you find inspiration to write again. Do I have to push you to collaborate to get you to write??? ;) Waiting....Hugs, LO

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2015 7:13:00 PM

such a stunning sensual write Eileen - You truly are the Queen of passion my friend:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/4/2015 11:29:00 PM

It is a title that I adore and love, Jan. :) Thank you for reminding me. I've been called that by others. Richard wrote a poem about me: Queen of the Romantic Pen. :) Passion and romance....are intertwined. Thanks for the visit, Dear.

Richard D Seal

Date: 4/4/2015 6:10:00 PM

You never cease to amaze my little Desert Orchid, Ooooo don't play with my fantasies lol, if there was no name on this poem i'd know who wrote it. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/4/2015 11:32:00 PM

Well, if it isn't Mr Seal come to tease! Hmmmmm....must Auntie give you a slap on the wrist for that comment??? I'll go easy on you since you haven't been around for a long time. I'm glad you know my writes, Mr Seal. I do have some on different themes. I've just written one on Brutality....Dark...dark. However, passion does reign supreme. Hope you are well...Oh...and thank you for your gracious visit. It's high time you made amends for being delinquent.