When You Loved Me
Sorry I didn't mention this in the last 4 poems,I typed up but please feel free to comment on my poems if you want to give me constructive criticism or comment on my poems in general, please do so ?? anyway here's, another poem,
this is When You Loved Me, enjoy!
When I was with you,
You held me in your arms;
You always made me smile;
Those days when you loved me.
When we cuddled and made love,
When ee cherished each other;
But those days are gone.
Without you, I'm always cold.
When you loved me, I was happy.
Then you left me in the dark.
You said goodbye forever.
Why did you go?
Why did you leave for good?
What went wrong?
"Together Foever,..." you said,
Those days when you loved me...
Copyright © Chelsea Zayas | Year Posted 2016
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