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When You Get My Age

It's not the color of my skin or an accent that my voice is in not the hair or the clothes I wear but my handicap the cross I bare I once was young and new like you My aches and pains were so few But now that time has had its say I live this suffering everyday I can't keep up if I walk with you And I need rest much more it's true But this discrimination to me is new Giving me a poor view of you I'll take my place at the back of the bus Try very easily not to cuss I'll understand my view of you Leave me behind is what you'll do But when I get to Heaven I'll be brand new And say when he gets my age Oh what will he do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/11/2024 12:24:00 PM
mind catching.
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Date: 1/14/2024 6:29:00 PM
Quite an emotive piece, John... Very well written and expressed... Aging is something we all must face and one day the young will understand...
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The Situation
Date: 1/18/2024 9:52:00 AM
What brought you here????
Date: 10/12/2023 8:52:00 AM
Getting older, most times wiser, mellowed,, usually kinder, not such a bad deal? Time to embrace those years! Health, happiness, love, honesty to you and yours!
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Date: 7/27/2023 10:13:00 AM
Aging bites? Especially when ridiculors and nitwits rub it in or mistreat
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Date: 6/25/2023 12:09:00 PM
a sweet memory to comfort you in that old age...
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John Loving Iii
Date: 6/25/2023 3:44:00 PM
You caught me drinking last night. I was so excited to remember you.
Date: 6/25/2023 8:30:00 AM
You and I have much in common, John. It's all aches and pain. I am trying not to take painkillers as they can affect serious organs. Witty poem, well done.
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Date: 6/25/2023 2:16:00 AM
It's no fun getting old is it John, I hope we will be greeted in heaven with open arms whatever our age! I had to smile about the bus part as I had to move seats the other day - I must post the poem I wrote about it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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