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When You Died

when you died, I felt dead all I saw was red it happened like a dream when I sleep I hear you scream when you died I felt dead

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Date: 2/25/2010 11:14:00 AM
Chay! I lovers you! this is a great poem babe! :D -Echo
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:45:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chay. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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