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When You Breathe Upon My World

the very act becomes my inspiration for it tells me that you live, your vitality still testifies of art, of love complete with beauty of its own. It sings of steadfast faith that needs no rainbows, naught of angel wings to carry messages of comfort to the ones who languish in despair. Already it is you who passes on the song. It is you who rides with me along the crest of every breath, to music that will bear the sweetness of it, when mortality cannot. You it is, who is the song that resonates within my heart. Comparisons will have an end, for When you breathe upon my world, it must give way and I care not which way it goes. You live. Oh God! It can never be the same and I become the only one empowered to see. ~

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Date: 7/31/2014 10:38:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem and believe you are writing about someone you love very much. Love always inspired me too. Happy writing and God bless you.
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/31/2014 10:47:00 AM
thank you, Regina

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