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When You Awaken

When you awaken When you awaken with morning skies smiling A hot cup of coffee and love in your heart Feel on the breezes my endless affection That flows ever stronger this day we’re apart Know that my thoughts they do linger about you Hoping your dreams will forever come true And hear these words that I send in a whisper “Each morning I wake up, I’ll always love you” Good morning soupers

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/12/2017 8:12:00 AM

I missed this..Guess I was abroad when you posted it..'Feel on the breezes my endless affection/that flows ever stronger this day We're apart'...So beautiful these lines and the affectionate emotions.

Chris Green
Date: 1/11/2019 8:59:00 AM

Thank you so very much Charmaine.

Tim Smith

Date: 12/9/2016 11:40:00 AM

A lovely morning greeting

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 12:07:00 PM

Thanks so very much Tim. I appreciate your support.

Darren White

Date: 12/9/2016 11:39:00 AM

Same as Paloma, Alexis, and Rick: checking your poems every day hoping to see an early morning coffee-and-love poem :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thanks so much Darren. I'll do my best to keep them coming.

David Bose

Date: 12/9/2016 8:42:00 AM

Wonderful sentiment, as always. Thanks, Dave

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thanks so very much David.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/9/2016 8:30:00 AM

Hi Chris, Good morning! It was my pleasure to awaken to such a beautiful scene. You start my mornings off so well. As always well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 8:32:00 AM

Good morning Alexis. I am more than happy I add a bit of happiness to your mornings because you always do that to mine. Thank you so much my sweet friend.

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/9/2016 8:04:00 AM

For me, it's the other way around. The coffee wakes me and oh how I love my coffee:) Good morning, Chris:)

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 8:29:00 AM

I like something hot first thing in the morning too my friend, and then I go for the coffee. :) Thanks so very much Daniel.

Paloma P

Date: 12/9/2016 8:03:00 AM

I'm with Rick too, always a pleasure to start my day with your poetry, but don't speak to me until I've had at least three cups of coffee. :) Ha...captcha is TNT.

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 8:29:00 AM

Okay, I'll wait...............................was that long enough? :) Thank you Paloma, your comments are the best way to start my day.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/9/2016 7:53:00 AM

Hi. I am laughing at Rick's comment - Yes, Chris you are a continual romantic (I think all the time) and we are lucky for that. I like this one. :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 8:28:00 AM

Thank you so much my sweet friend and good morning to you.

White Wolf

Date: 12/9/2016 6:41:00 AM

Good morning, Chris! How can you be so romantic first thing in the morn? Love your work as always!

Chris Green
Date: 12/9/2016 8:27:00 AM

It's easy if you wake up next to the right person. :) Thanks so much my friend.