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When You Are Young

..dedicated to W.B. Yeats, in response to his poem 'When You Are Old' When you are young sweet innocence abounds, your step is gentle, all your dreams are free of grim disquietude, such joy you see as gaily you discharge your daily rounds. Your heart is light, bereft of grave concern that troubles him whose purity is lost, who argues and contends at any cost, who complicates and twists at every turn. Simplicity must be your cornerstone, strengthen your heart against all sorts of strife that undermine a childlike view of life, strive and prevail, lest innocence be gone!

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Date: 5/12/2016 11:05:00 AM
Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/12/2016 11:12:00 AM
Many thanks Funom... I am most grateful for your kind remarks. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 5/9/2016 5:18:00 PM
Very good Keith. Agree with you completely.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/9/2016 6:31:00 PM
Many thanks Barry! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 5/9/2016 7:29:00 AM
Lovely
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/9/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thanks James! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 5/7/2016 6:36:00 PM
You inspire me with such talent, a beautiful poem Keith.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/9/2016 5:03:00 PM
Many thanks Arthur. You know how much I am uplifted by your work. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 5/7/2016 11:16:00 AM
How right you are! Thanks for a superb review... Best wishes, Keith
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