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When You Are Gone

The garden then will seem unkempt birdsong silent, too all the flowers in their beds will strain for sight of you When you are gone the clocks will tick and time will pass- its true this once, glad heart frozen with grief will choose monotony Slow motion grey -life steal away the dawn has failed the dream And nothing now will ever be what it was meant to seem Suzanne Delaney

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/8/2013 8:29:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this heartfelt poem of yours. Well done!
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:33:00 AM
Dearest SuZ- Hold on. love, Kathy
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Date: 12/1/2013 7:41:00 AM
A strong sense of the anticipation of grief. It is coming and you can't get out of the way.
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Date: 12/1/2013 12:19:00 AM
Very appealing and touching thoughts, Suz
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Date: 11/30/2013 1:04:00 PM
- Touching and beautiful words Suz! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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