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When Will We See Our Peaceful World Again

When will we see our peaceful world again? ..... When will we see our peaceful world again? When will we see our people with smiles? When will we see the freedom of all people? Our present world is burning with lost for love The crimes and destruction are dancing to the evil's tune God's anger and mother nature's disturbance cause this world to die day by day. Innocent people are helplessly trying to protect their owned land with stone and strings from their enemies But they are gun downed to death without judgments Unwanted wars are spread all over the world and bring their nations to get hatred towards each other’s The word of peace always has been written on the river and washed out into the ocean with blood Hope become hopeless and life become lifeless Having lost faith in heaven, turning the world into hell Let us pray to prevail peace in this world very soon Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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Date: 9/8/2013 10:26:00 AM
A beautiful prayer/poem. I too join you in prayer for peace. It is the leaders of the Countries that mess everything up. that is what I think. There is not much we can do, but pray. Thanks for sharing. .. Lucilla
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Date: 8/26/2013 6:11:00 PM
I think we all long for world piece and hope to see it soon...the news is so depressing anymore...good job with this one! :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/26/2013 10:17:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 8/26/2013 3:46:00 PM
Maybe if all would pray , they would be turned from the bad they are doing. Very nice one!!
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Date: 8/26/2013 10:17:00 PM
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Date: 8/26/2013 12:17:00 PM
i can relate to this , R.. may we finally experience oneness.. beautiful!:) huggs
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Date: 8/26/2013 10:17:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Hugs
Date: 8/26/2013 9:24:00 AM
- A good topic to write about these days Ravi .... peace in the whole earth, unfortunately I think that will never happen. - A very good poem my friend Ravi. - Have a peaceful week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2013 10:18:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Huggs
Date: 8/26/2013 7:35:00 AM
There will be a time of peace upon this earth and even the animals will be at peace with each other and man..I am looking forward to that time..Great work about a topic that is worth discussing..Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/26/2013 10:18:00 PM
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Date: 8/26/2013 7:15:00 AM
God promises this world which is groaning under the oppression of sin will pass away and will be replaced with a new world and a new city will come down from heaven and there will be no need for light because Jesus will be the light. Thanks for your kind visit and I enjoyed your thought provoking poem.
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Date: 8/26/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thank for your comment on my poem Sir. Appreciated.

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