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When We First Kissed

Lead me onwards, Arabian star, The night is long and dark sunrise calls from afar , let’s walk side by side: in the heart of this park there is a lake calm and wide, here, the stars are near than the stars in the skies, and I can dry any tear after kissing your dim eyes. See our faces reflected there as if the sun and the moon could the same space share, Make your lips be mine, a first kiss is like a bloom ready to welcome the sunshine, Lead me through the night, take me to your embrace: on the lake, the only light is the joy from your face.

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Date: 11/25/2014 11:41:00 AM
Nicely written It just flows with passion, . I especially like the phrase "the only light is the joy from your face" wonderful line.
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João Camilo
Date: 11/30/2014 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Brian, that phrase was always been on of the part of the poems I was most unsure. Glad you liked.
Date: 11/23/2014 1:10:00 PM
wonderful romantic imagery - great write:-) hugs JAN XXX
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João Camilo
Date: 11/30/2014 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Jan. :)

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