When Two Stars Align

Up in the ink sky A lone star shines My eyes fixed on its sight winking at me its diamond eyes Empowers me to strive To make a wish come to life To bring someone special a smile By love, a dancing light, beguiled Crossing my fingers tight That God, His love, my light To trust His will, surrendering mine To find he who will bind life with mine. Our souls as one, an even brighter shine As when two lone stars come to align. Up the ink sky, my eyes search the night Just to find your shining light. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 07.28.11

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/30/2011 5:24:00 PM

So beautifully written, Caroline! Keeping fingers crossed for both of us that we find our "star" soul mates. You have such a warm heart and it comes through in all your poetry. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/29/2011 8:24:00 AM

Your poetry is always very interesting and holds the readers attention from start to finish Caroline. Have a splendid weekend and I will return to read more of your writing soon. Love, Carol

Jl Sadberry

Date: 7/28/2011 9:10:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “I Found Myself Standing Aside Your Beauty, Gazing Into The Night Sky, Smiling At That Bright Star Which Lightens Your Precious Heart & Dreams, My Dear Precious & Priceless CarolineCecil = I Love Your Wonderful Verse for Tis Always Pleasant While As Being Brushed Most Often Amid Faithfuls Spectacular Arrays In Splendid Colours == Very Beautiful.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *

Amanda Moore

Date: 7/28/2011 8:14:00 PM

this is quite beautiful I enjoyed reading it!