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When Time Passes By In Slow Motion

Be prepared all you young'uns The golden years aren't always golden Looking ahead when I was younger Thought, “what a fantastic notion” Life would be a blast lounging around Enjoying my life at its best Sorry to have to burst your bubble Coz here comes the real test You wake up early each morning Ready for come what may But it isn't too long before you realize You have no plans per say Suddenly you've become very aware You're not needed the way you once were You still have so much to offer But life has passed you by in a whirr The hardest thing for you to get used to The fact you're no longer the star The world is still singing and motoring along But you're not driving the car So be prepared all you young'uns The golden years aren't that golden Enjoy life before the inevitable happens When time passes by in slow motion © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 4/3/2014 9:38:00 AM
Oh Jack! For those with imagination, the fun never ends! Dragon was just telling me: He's decided he wants a Dragon Nativity Poem next Christmas. He wants to meet the Supreme Leader of the Universe again. And that Cactus nightmare and movie thing... Well, he wants a poem too! Since when can we... watch time slowly pass us by! Or as Dragon says... There's always room for one more smile! Naturally he wants be at the center of all the attention! Grandpa Troll thinks I'm spoiling Dragon! Who me??
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/7/2014 5:20:00 PM
You're not driving the car! I guess that sums it up in a nutshell! Hard to let go of the reins! "There's always room for one more smile!" love that phrase my dear Carol... love ya a bunch! XOXOX
Date: 4/2/2014 9:01:00 AM
Oooooh ,Jack... the time passes in slow motion... only because He wants you to enjoy the rest of your time... with the love of families and friends... feel the breeze...see the beauty of the earth...create a poems.. and comments to otehrs.. lol...You are one of the golden star that shines us.. So let the time pass.... We're glad to have you TODAY! ^__^
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/2/2014 9:41:00 AM
I'm one of the very lucky ones, my sweet friend! I'm 78 and never had any serious illnesses. Why are some fortunate while others are not... the luck of the draw I guess! Hope I didn't just put the hex on myself! LOL Love you a bunch, sweet Alyah! XOXOX
Date: 4/2/2014 7:49:00 AM
Oh I love this, Jack! Thanks for the advice. Wouldn't it be great if you share what you learned through the years so we don't have to learn it? Just the thought. Have a great morning, my friend :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/2/2014 7:54:00 AM
Everyone must experience it for themselves! When we're young, old age is eons away! Then... wham! Thank you dear friend! Loving hugs, Jack xox

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