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When They'Re Spent With You

Walking slowly hand in hand Along a wooded patch of land Taking in the wonders that we see Falling leaves of colors pure In these moments we adore All alone together you and me Kissing under skies of blue Soft upon the early dew Here within my arms where you belong Hearing cardinals in the trees Singing sweet their harmonies Melodic is their perfect autumn song Watching as the squirrels run Beneath a wondrous morning sun Smiling is the thing we seem to do A cool breeze floats within your hair There’s so much beauty that we share Still my every heartbeat is for you Clouds meander, passing slow Different shapes they come to show As we gaze and point high up above Spending days amidst this view Always is a dream come true When they’re spent with you, the one I love

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Date: 11/16/2016 2:04:00 PM
I have to remind myself at times that you rhyme, your poetry is so fluid. Always utterly romantic, simply stunning Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/16/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thanks so much my sweet friend. I always appreciate your visits to my poetry
Date: 11/15/2016 9:06:00 AM
Melodic and sweet....I so love those red breasted cardinals..Oh.yes.those.red RobinS... How beautiful this is Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 11:48:00 AM
For us it is cardinals year round and robins in the spring. Thank you so much Charmaine for the smile this morning.
Date: 11/15/2016 8:55:00 AM
Very beautifully penned poem, Chris. The lush imagery is superb. I can feel the love through the sheer force of your words. Gorgeous poem, my friend. Top notch. Love always. RW
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Chris Green
Date: 11/15/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thanks my friend, I am glad you could feel my emotions in this one.

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