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When the World Grew Wings - Part 1

There once came a day when the world took flight ('twas only a handful who gaped at the sight) For when she spread her wings so few could believe; and fewer still could keep alive the dream, that had awakened for all to see. Galileo Galilei took center stage, as we flipped through yet another page of shocking discovery. But poor Gally, took to fame, an a pedestal so lonely; and far from raising eyebrows only, questions also, were being raised. Like what happened to her perch when she flew across the star laden sky? Did not everyone's heart give a lurch as we kissed that lovely fowl goodbye? No longer a disc with perilous edges that sat lackadaisically on God's thumb. She instead became a turquoise marble dancing circles around the sun. Without a single drop to spritz Saturn, she held her oceans marvelously intact. Though quite unknowingly, in performance all along. Einstein, nonetheless, dissected the task. Copernicus and his daring gang were all the rage, but it wasn't kind to the long-dried ink of a holy page. For you see, when this our humble home took wings, rather than elated - the world became sore afraid, exclaiming, "Who let her loose? I'll have his head in a noose!" And rather than let her try her feathers, they kept Earth in a cage (Maya Angelou, God rest her soul, would be dismayed) For five centuries prior so few could admire how beautifully she flew beyond heaven's blue! Nietzsche grabbed a shovel and began to dig. Others tagged along and said, "Make it double!" As the world gained a freedom it ne'er had before (but who could have known what was in store?) Far beyond the wars, that ensued shortly after that disco ball was plucked from the rafters of God's domain. (some dared to claim that disco wasn't the only thing gasping for breath). As the doubts began to linger of magic and her validity; we spewed words of such acidity, for no longer a yo-yo tied to a deity's finger, we reclaimed our rightful crowns with rigor, taking back the earth for ourselves (that beautiful globe upon the shelf) Who cut the string? and who clipped her wings? (the wings, that is, of my heart in mourning for my Everything) Why when she flew, did she leave me feeling blue? Finding out her annual circuit I ask, was it worth it, when tied to her leg was a World-view in which my heart was glued? (continued in Part 2) NOTE: This poem was originally split into two parts due to character limit restrictions. After becoming a Member I've edited Part 2 to include the ENTIRE poem. I still keep this post, however, just because I don't want to delete people's comments ...

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Date: 2/16/2016 1:51:00 AM
The metaphor of the Earth being an exotic bird free in flight with the revelation of its orbit is eloquent along with the astronomical history. The migration of our planet, and of our souls awakens the astronaut of my mind to space walk Timothy. Your affectionate application of astronomy, and metaphysics is inspiring to me. The implications of the Enlightenment, the Inquisitions, atheism, World War One being the consequence of humanity's quest to be free of corrupted religion...J.A.B.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/16/2016 2:25:00 AM
Wow Justin. It does my heart good to see when a person such as yourself catches my subtle allusions, and is inspired to write such a lengthy response that compares almost to my poem in length! As far as Nietzsche goes, I've never read his major works, except for his A Parable of a Mad Man, which is the idea I was working off for "burying God" so to speak.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/16/2016 1:59:00 AM
Continued...3...the way you empatheticly describe the revolution of thought, and how you express your personal, internal reaction to this change in mindset is very poignant Timothy. A great poem...J.A.B.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/16/2016 1:56:00 AM
To discover the creator with is stirring. I do not believe Nietzsche was an atheist though, his words have been manipulated by many to suit a number of agendas, and the Great War was manufactured, preplanned to achieve a much greater goal for humanity, orchestrated by the ruling class. Peoples minds were misdirected to accept certain situations and outcomes...J.A.B.
Date: 2/15/2016 7:52:00 AM
I read this poem a few times, Timothy. You deal with earth that rotates on its axis and revolves around the sun; the several learned ones who contributed to find and give us answers which at times got them into trouble and raised heated discussions...and more! Liked your mention of Maya Angelou and Earth kept in a cage. You are a knowledgeable man, Timothy:) ~ regards // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/16/2016 2:22:00 AM
Thanks Paul! A bit of an odd topic to write about I suppose, but I had a lot of fun trying to blend history and poetry together in a way that inspires deeper thought. Glad you enjoyed, and appreciate your analysis :)

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