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When the World Grew Wings - Full

There once came a day when the world took flight ('twas only a handful who gaped at the sight) For when she spread her wings so few could believe; and fewer still could keep alive the dream, that had awakened for all to see. Galileo Galilei took center stage, as we flipped through yet another page of shocking discovery. But poor Gally, took to fame, an a pedestal so lonely; and far from raising eyebrows only, questions also, were being raised. Like what happened to her perch when she flew across the star laden sky? Did not everyone's heart give a lurch as we kissed that lovely fowl goodbye? No longer a disc with perilous edges that sat lackadaisically on God's thumb. She instead became a turquoise marble dancing circles around the sun. Without a single drop to spritz Saturn, she held her oceans marvelously intact. Though quite unknowingly, in performance all along. Einstein, nonetheless, dissected the task. Copernicus and his daring gang were all the rage, but it wasn't kind to the long-dried ink of a holy page. For you see, when this our humble home took wings, rather than elated - the world became sore afraid, exclaiming, "Who let her loose? I'll have his head in a noose!" And rather than let her try her feathers, they kept Earth in a cage (Maya Angelou, God rest her soul, would be dismayed) For five centuries prior so few could admire how beautifully she flew beyond heaven's blue! Nietzsche grabbed a shovel and began to dig. Others tagged along and said, "Make it double!" As the world gained a freedom it ne'er had before (but who could have known what was in store?) Far beyond the wars, that ensued shortly after that disco ball was plucked from the rafters of God's domain. (some dared to claim that disco wasn't the only thing gasping for breath). As the doubts began to linger of magic and her validity; we spewed words of such acidity, for no longer a yo-yo tied to a deity's finger, we reclaimed our rightful crowns with rigor, taking back the earth for ourselves (that beautiful globe upon the shelf) Who cut the string? and who clipped her wings? (the wings, that is, of my heart in mourning for my Everything) Why when she flew, did she leave me feeling blue? Finding out her annual circuit I ask, was it worth it, when tied to her leg was a World-view in which my heart was glued? YES! A thousands times YES! Did you not see her soar through azure space? Nor catch a glimpse of her beautiful face? Could a moment such as this be replaced? As we flip through yet another chapter and verse of boldface discovery far from terse. History will never be the same as we come to this nebulous new age; But know this my friends ... ... the ink is far from dried upon the page. Rather it has taken a detour into our veins, through our bones, and through our fingers - bellowing out our mouths like an opera singer! Watch as the melody rains upon every doubter's parade. Yes, the world took her wings letting rest the charade of her former statuesque. But far from burying magic and her wonder, every single time we stop to ponder, it is MAGIC we continue to uncover.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/24/2016 2:30:00 PM
Oh Yes!!! That flows like an epic now...uninterrupted . I have it as a FAV. I may have to do a reverse Eckphrasis with this and make the words match a work of art.....SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 9:29:00 PM
Interesting, Suz! I've never heard of an "Eckphrasis" ... I will have to research this more :)
Date: 2/23/2016 7:35:00 PM
Hi Timothy: This flows so magnetically. I love the mental image our earth with wings. It would make a great looking image for a collage. I am so impressed with how you find the magic and wonder. Always a joy read. You will be able to edit this into a single post now. Best, SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/23/2016 11:56:00 PM
Done ... looks much better now! Happy you enjoyed, Suzanne. It was a lot of fun for me to get carried away with the metaphor.
Date: 2/16/2016 2:14:00 AM
What an inspiring way to finish this wonderful epic Timothy, Bravo! The magic of the unimaginable, the unbelievable becoming the truth within the eyes of our souls, limitless creativity is what She bestows to her children by grace of the Almighty. "The ink is far from dried upon the page, rather it has taken a detour into our veins..." your passion is awesome! J.A.B.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/16/2016 2:40:00 AM
Glad you could connect on the feeling of joy and excitement in this last segment. Always love your comments, as the passion that oozes in the poems you write, so too does it eek into your everyday conversation!
Date: 2/15/2016 3:12:00 PM
Enjoyed!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/16/2016 2:38:00 AM
Thanks again!
Date: 2/15/2016 8:00:00 AM
...and you finish off with a triumphant feeling of exaltation, Timothy! The last stanza is a most fitting ending! #7+++ Well done! (oh...Arthur said that already!) // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/16/2016 2:36:00 AM
Thanks Paul! I had a lot of fun with the zany metaphor.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/16/2016 2:34:00 AM
Thanks Paul! I had a lot of fun with the zany metaphor.
Date: 2/14/2016 9:27:00 PM
A beautiful poetic Saga, if I may say, well done!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/16/2016 2:33:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, my friend! Appreciate it! I only wish the character limit would allow me to keep it all in one post.

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