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When the Wicked Winter Comes

============================== When the wicked winter comes seeping past the wards she keeps, she looks on as he succumbs, thanking God it's while he sleeps. She finds she is ill prepared when the wicked winter comes, to let go the life they shared. Anguish swings its pendulums. Heartbreak's endless requiems, rites for which she dearly pays, when the wicked winter comes, blight her solitary days. Tears remain behind her eyes, years maintain the interums, yet she still finds pain's surprise, when the wicked winter comes. ==============================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/6/2017 8:07:00 AM
A sad one, congrats on your win.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 6/6/2017 9:07:00 AM
Hi Richard! Thank you. xoxo
Date: 6/5/2017 2:35:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, Lycia, congratulations on your win :-)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 6/6/2017 9:06:00 AM
Hi Eve! Thank you. xoxo
Date: 6/5/2017 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. The pendulum in your poem swings very subtly and is nevertheless very poignant. I hope that after the wicked winter (or alongside it) may come a beautiful spring. Many wishes, Kai
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Lycia Harding
Date: 6/6/2017 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Kai! Fun and elegant contest - keep 'em coming! xoxo
Date: 11/28/2015 12:47:00 PM
Glad to have found this beautifully written sad, sad poem. A7
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Lycia Harding
Date: 1/6/2016 12:04:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. I think the repetitive form of the Quatern lends to the sadness of the write.
Date: 11/21/2015 11:16:00 AM
Wonderfully written but sad. Yet, know that winter harbors reflections; then surely, spring. Peace and blessings.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/21/2015 1:20:00 PM
Rainstorms, flung from earth's winter pelt **+** pelt seasons into change below **+** Below the soil as spring is felt **+** felt springs uncoil to sip the snow....
Date: 11/20/2015 3:45:00 PM
Wonderful use of poetic devices, your words flow with the ease of a skilled pen. Congrats on your contest win.
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:45:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write Lycia!
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:19:00 PM
Lycia, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/19/2015 1:50:00 PM
the repetition of the line and allieteration of wicked winter intensifies the sadness in this emotional write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2015 4:02:00 PM
I Loved how this progressed....the wicked winter, advancing stress....perfectly done within my eyes....but with your talents, that's no surprise....;)
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:47:00 PM
Nice write, Lycia.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/11/2015 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Lin. xoxo

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