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When the Sun Kissed the Earth

I hope you remember the lips Soft and round and moist Warm and welcoming and giving I hope you remember the heat The moments and the chatting and the playing The breaths and the journeys and the memories I hope you remember the excitement The planning and the waiting and the patience The first date and the first day and the first touch I hope you remember the meeting I know somewhere in your book of romanticism There is a page for us, about us I know somewhere our ribbons of love are still tightly tied Though never visible anymore They never die with the changing lanes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/18/2015 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful write Njeri with such a deep sense of longing that dwells in all of us. I looked forward to reading more for I find whenever I invest the time to read other poets, I am always amazed at such talent. Great job!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/15/2015 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Vincent:-)
Date: 7/17/2015 9:46:00 PM
G'day njeri... it was a real pleasure to read your delightful poem njeri. It has a beaut charm to it - thank you - Lindsay
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/15/2015 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay:-)
Date: 7/17/2015 8:18:00 PM
Oh this is so romantic and beautiful! Loved this poem!!!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/15/2015 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Arthur:-)

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